On my last elevator pitch, I received a lot of great feedback! Mostly people said that I needed to speak up a little bit more because I was very soft spoken. People also said that they thought I seemed confident and seemed to be very knowledgeable about my area of business. I tried to keep these positive aspects, and also work on speaking up a little bit to address that area of concern.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AbJgsY7gBY&feature=youtu.be
Hi Robert,
ReplyDeleteGreat job working with your elevator pitch. I think you did a great job and I like how you took your feedback from the last elevator pitch to fix this one. Your confidence as you speak is great and really shows the area of business and how successful you can be. You spoke clearly and very nicely. Overall you did a great job!
Hey Robert,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and reading about the feedback that you received. You did a good job at being focused and staying on topic the whole time while also staying confident. It is clear that you have confidence in what you are talking about during the whole video. This shows that you really do know about creating a business and using customer service. Overall, you did an awesome job creating your elevator pitch.
Hey Robert, I think this idea is really going to be popular with businesses. I think for your pitch to draw in your potential customers more, you could plan out your pauses. You paused a few times but they didn't always appear to be intentional. Also being intentional about cutting out filter language such as "um" and "like". I think this will take your pitch to the next level, hope this helps!
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