https://youtu.be/wffJshckEAw
After my last pitch, the feedback I received was that I needed to draw in potential customers more. I also heard that I should try to limit filler words such as "um" and "like." I also received positive feedback, saying that I sounded confident and comfortable with the topic. All of this feedback was very helpful and I believe it was accurate.
I tried to incorporate these aspects into this new pitch. I tried to limit filler words. I tried to continue to sound confident. I also tried to relate to the potential customer more and draw them in. I think I incorporated these aspects fairly well and improved my pitch.
Hello Robert, great pitch. I think you did a good job with improving certain aspects based on the feedback you received. You successfully present your idea in a way that would keep the targeted audience interested. You clearly show that you know what you’re talking about but I do believe that you can improve your elevator pitches by avoiding short pauses. However, great job!
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and reading about the feedback that you received. I think that you have done a great job improving your elevator pitch since we completed the previous one. You also did such a good job being confident and really expressing that while you are talking throughout the pitch. Overall, you did an awesome job completing this elevator pitch and the entire blog post.
Hi Robert, I want to say that I think that you did a great job with this pitch and think you did really well in addressing all of your previous feedback. I think that your pitch sounded great and that the customers would be much more drawn to your product. You still sounded very confident and think that each time you have done this, there have been improvements in your overall pitching skills. Once again, great job and keep it up.
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